Yo.
It ain't bad, everyone gonna have they own opinion.. I say ignore the haters like the 2 below.. and listen in on the positive because instead of giving you good advice they said listen to so and so, and instead of constructive criticism they just told you.. you're pussy. I think it could be better but it wasn't completely trash like they made it seem.. I say keep it up and practice you'll get better. That's all there is to it.